Very nice Fiona. I would use cobalt blue and rose madder for the shadow colour. Very accomplished. Primrose is yellow titanate in other makes. Forgive spelling but use lemon yellow and white gouace. Again forgive spelling.
Very nice Judy. You have done a lovey job. I like the touches of green in the trees too. I may have done some distant trees in a cooler colour to push them back and add more depth but that’s being picky.