This topic contains 3 replies, has 4 voices, and was last updated by  Joy Dix 3 days, 18 hours ago.

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    Brian
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    18 pts

    An 8*6in watercolour. I rarely do still life paintings so would be interested in what people think.

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    Paula
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    10 pts

    Brian,

    The looseness and the colors give this painting a lovely, fresh look.  The sunshine on the wall is a nice touch. Could you add something to the empty space on the upper left?

    Paula

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    Brad
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    18 pts

    Nice choice in wine.  Anyway, i think that’s a lovely painting

    Take time to look and make sure you see.

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    Joy Dix
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    1 pt

    It’s a very nice still life, Brian and I do like the sunshine effect.   The only trouble is it takes your eye straight out of the picture.   I agree with Paula – compositionally you need something to draw the eye back in.

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