Your Watercolour Paintings Land formations. Utah

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  • #97708 Score: 0

    8 pts

    This one was tough to do. Foreground was missing something and I’ve added some odd looking plants. Right values are giving me hard time.

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  • #97710 Score: 0

    14 pts

    I would lift some of the dark cloud bottoms on the right as i think the clouds are too parallel.

    the plants are fine. I would add some more dark values to the mountains in the mid-ground.

  • #97712 Score: 0

    13 pts

    I think the values are okay.  To me, what’s missing is a little punch of complementary color–maybe a hint of red or purple somewhere, a little light red or burnt sienna in the foreground or some purple shadows on the distant land formations.  Just my humble opinion… Overall, it’s a very accomplished painting–loose style and good feeling of depth!


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